tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post1288597845196088485..comments2023-05-18T06:59:59.945-07:00Comments on As if by magic: Milk and HoneyArchna Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03372418962433999972noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-50174366676394435372013-03-12T22:10:55.635-07:002013-03-12T22:10:55.635-07:00what an awesome imagination!!GOD<3Uwhat an awesome imagination!!GOD<3Uadhi dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15945609464117886294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-73906885699254483632013-03-11T23:03:44.916-07:002013-03-11T23:03:44.916-07:00It is always a delight to visit and succumb to you...It is always a delight to visit and succumb to your words mysteriously sensual and tantalizingly out of reach. Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-17112494257431188632013-03-11T11:33:05.679-07:002013-03-11T11:33:05.679-07:00So sensually expressed...filling in image and I lo...So sensually expressed...filling in image and I love this:<br /><br />"licking the corners of a candied moon"<br /><br />I just love that you arrive...full circle with your last line and title. <br /><br />So good to read you again!! Thank you so much for your lovely comment @ my blog! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-56447050701819655132013-03-11T02:46:25.166-07:002013-03-11T02:46:25.166-07:00that first line - wow! Pulled me in right from the...that first line - wow! Pulled me in right from the start!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-27814723429418140022013-03-11T00:57:34.250-07:002013-03-11T00:57:34.250-07:00I originally read your poem but skipped over it be...I originally read your poem but skipped over it because I could not get anything out of it.<br />You were kind enough to comment on my silly poem, so I have visited again.<br />I read the comments, and as usual, they don't help me either.<br />The use of words is strong, but that is easy with that vocabulary.<br />But I can't see a metaphor, a focus or coherent ideas.<br />But I must tell you, I am a poetic idiot in many ways. So I will tell you my only impression.<br />First I thought it might be two dead lovers in the grave, described using food and gore. And one of those lovers committed suicide.<br /><br />Can you help me out more?Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-37666521579232915992013-03-10T23:48:21.729-07:002013-03-10T23:48:21.729-07:00Wow! Such a powerful flow of the most feral, most ...Wow! Such a powerful flow of the most feral, most basic, most instinctual of feelings. Erotic, emotional and engaging,all at the same time.<br /><br />A beautiful flow of words and imagery, building up to a searing climax and a soothing end.Mixihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03929917191909619353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-32459650426383122252013-03-10T22:41:02.786-07:002013-03-10T22:41:02.786-07:00Love the imagery. Gorgeous.Love the imagery. Gorgeous.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-86772289648191179282013-03-10T18:53:12.135-07:002013-03-10T18:53:12.135-07:00"licking the corners of a candied moon"!..."licking the corners of a candied moon"!<br />This is beautiful.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-56174983954777709912013-03-10T17:42:53.316-07:002013-03-10T17:42:53.316-07:00Our moment full of sugar washes to the shore
where...Our moment full of sugar washes to the shore<br />where he once served me, warm milk and honey<br />I love it! Beautiful!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-12168372542998583772013-03-10T11:21:46.723-07:002013-03-10T11:21:46.723-07:00Silk cotton hour... so many nice word combinations...Silk cotton hour... so many nice word combinations! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-77866421968292859722013-03-10T10:45:06.390-07:002013-03-10T10:45:06.390-07:00"Our moment full of sugar washes to the shore..."Our moment full of sugar washes to the shore<br />where he once served me, warm milk and honey" Superb ... this one is awesome !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-19179224568635308622013-03-10T10:22:08.195-07:002013-03-10T10:22:08.195-07:00From the opening line to the end, wow to the piece...From the opening line to the end, wow to the piece ~ A lot of meaning & emotions to the relationship ~ Specially like second stanza- eaten thin, eating a mouthful of berries, candied moon ~<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your beautiful work at Real Toads ~ <br /><br />Wishing you Happy Sunday ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-34711089963684029082013-03-10T10:08:27.814-07:002013-03-10T10:08:27.814-07:00dang...what a feel in this...great intentional use...dang...what a feel in this...great intentional use of words...the blood clot night, long body eaten thin...the killing of oneself...it sets up a really nice close though...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-37566284457784612802013-03-10T09:47:53.759-07:002013-03-10T09:47:53.759-07:00yowza, what a moment. i love this, especially &quo...yowza, what a moment. i love this, especially "blood clot night" and the sugar moment washing to the shore. wow.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.com