tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post6117521436411385971..comments2023-05-18T06:59:59.945-07:00Comments on As if by magic: Yet They DropArchna Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03372418962433999972noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-25749249278986047112012-10-01T19:47:47.621-07:002012-10-01T19:47:47.621-07:00Beautiful joining of words from other poets...Love...Beautiful joining of words from other poets...Lovely work!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-81939377013917370622012-09-29T08:38:31.870-07:002012-09-29T08:38:31.870-07:00This is absolutely glorious. BEAUTIFUL! "The ...This is absolutely glorious. BEAUTIFUL! "The stars drop silently." Wow. Love it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-81538196360777102962012-09-28T22:50:15.355-07:002012-09-28T22:50:15.355-07:00What a wealth of poetry to be found in this cento ...What a wealth of poetry to be found in this cento ... and as others have mentioned, so seamlessly fashioned as to be wholly flawless ... this is very fine ... truly<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/09/accept-shadows-centon.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-22679657158572234102012-09-28T19:09:06.725-07:002012-09-28T19:09:06.725-07:00I like the image of stars dropping...and the last ...I like the image of stars dropping...and the last line is superb ... :)Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-36573689909991096842012-09-28T18:59:12.530-07:002012-09-28T18:59:12.530-07:00Just to watch such sights and suck them in is gran...Just to watch such sights and suck them in is grand. Also escaping from ones land with the night falls, helps break down the walls. Nicely done!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-5967787756518574462012-09-28T14:24:04.392-07:002012-09-28T14:24:04.392-07:00Nice work, Archana! Some interesting lines, well ...Nice work, Archana! Some interesting lines, well placed, to make a lovely whole!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-21931665153240007652012-09-28T14:08:14.482-07:002012-09-28T14:08:14.482-07:00An atmospheric gem, beautifully done!An atmospheric gem, beautifully done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-81138200563898235342012-09-28T12:39:22.834-07:002012-09-28T12:39:22.834-07:00How well you have combined their writing to produc...How well you have combined their writing to produce sensations you can almost taste. What fearful truth is contained in the penultimate line.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-4179111665392899842012-09-28T10:04:00.960-07:002012-09-28T10:04:00.960-07:00enjoyed this...loved the finishenjoyed this...loved the finishashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-10060231688752850732012-09-28T06:36:08.794-07:002012-09-28T06:36:08.794-07:00None of these words are mine, they are lines from ...None of these words are mine, they are lines from the three poets I mentioned above. This is an exercise where pieces are collected from various sources and placed together as a sort of poem collage. :)Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-57974571596504255522012-09-28T05:42:46.132-07:002012-09-28T05:42:46.132-07:00A lovely piece specially the last line ~ Seamless...A lovely piece specially the last line ~ Seamless weaving and inspiring words ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-67210898930631293912012-09-28T03:27:11.865-07:002012-09-28T03:27:11.865-07:00absolutely lovely...esp that last line....its kind...absolutely lovely...esp that last line....its kinda staccato-ness works really well....i like the escape to night as well...that i def understand in my own life...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-47657678707499263102012-09-28T01:00:07.368-07:002012-09-28T01:00:07.368-07:00such a good one Archana....I must read them now......such a good one Archana....I must read them now....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-44127174658583890732012-09-28T00:06:32.841-07:002012-09-28T00:06:32.841-07:00Stars dropping in the woods, what a lovely visuali...Stars dropping in the woods, what a lovely visualization . You write amazing Archna :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-25600025109518052912012-09-27T23:13:51.081-07:002012-09-27T23:13:51.081-07:00hmmm nice..the silently dropping stars, the woods ...hmmm nice..the silently dropping stars, the woods a well..blue moon crateres..a very atmospheric piece..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-85192476410082230162012-09-27T21:46:01.047-07:002012-09-27T21:46:01.047-07:00A beautiful tapestry, with threads from so diverse...A beautiful tapestry, with threads from so diverse a crowd. The wonderful thing about this cento is that it stands well on its own, but also sends you seeking for the source material, to experience the originals as well.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.com