tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post6990303906719915219..comments2023-05-18T06:59:59.945-07:00Comments on As if by magic: Speckle of AirArchna Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03372418962433999972noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-36879612039722725302012-05-22T17:38:37.310-07:002012-05-22T17:38:37.310-07:00Dr. Neha, thank you!Dr. Neha, thank you!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-34637227887087479082012-05-22T17:35:41.137-07:002012-05-22T17:35:41.137-07:00Hi, thanks for your visit. And also, for sharing a...Hi, thanks for your visit. And also, for sharing a bit of your heart. <br /><br />I will make my way to your space soon.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-29058373130082924572012-05-15T16:16:34.058-07:002012-05-15T16:16:34.058-07:00very well written archna. keep up the good work !!...very well written archna. keep up the good work !!dr. nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400996839103622489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-61645271633653808192012-05-13T12:39:53.924-07:002012-05-13T12:39:53.924-07:00intense..very deep emotions that the verse portray...intense..very deep emotions that the verse portrays.. each line was build up mightily for the final words.. i take a bow, sincerely, the verse spell bound me. my heart grieved for the little girl. too many praises from me, but that is what i am going through right now.<br /><br />anyway, thanks for sharing this. :)<br /><br />My take : <a href="http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/05/14/humans-and-other-animals-haiku-46/" rel="nofollow">Humans and Other Animals </a>.Sankara Jayanth Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04454731848877201941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-90319692733112051052012-05-12T08:06:29.673-07:002012-05-12T08:06:29.673-07:00Hi Sheilagh, thanks so much for reading!Hi Sheilagh, thanks so much for reading!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-58763578412875593252012-05-12T08:06:03.366-07:002012-05-12T08:06:03.366-07:00Love love love. you.Love love love. you.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-88978254284016229232012-05-12T08:05:40.341-07:002012-05-12T08:05:40.341-07:00Thank you Sherry!Thank you Sherry!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-43487533191627773832012-05-12T08:04:58.449-07:002012-05-12T08:04:58.449-07:00Hi you. I know she did and Jae, it's good to t...Hi you. I know she did and Jae, it's good to talk to these girls sometimes. :)Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-72004478324067543072012-05-12T08:03:54.086-07:002012-05-12T08:03:54.086-07:00Thank you Michael. And thank you for the melody in...Thank you Michael. And thank you for the melody in words.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-59973763705192769522012-05-12T08:03:08.447-07:002012-05-12T08:03:08.447-07:00Thank you Susan!Thank you Susan!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-86043392974609580052012-05-12T08:02:48.914-07:002012-05-12T08:02:48.914-07:00Yes, just a hint of kindness. Yet sometimes, it is...Yes, just a hint of kindness. Yet sometimes, it is too late. <br /><br />Thank you.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-35475067941802803192012-05-12T08:01:43.187-07:002012-05-12T08:01:43.187-07:00I've come by a few times, Debra. I missed you....I've come by a few times, Debra. I missed you. I hope you are feeling better. :)<br /><br />I'm glad that you've put yourself on a writing schedule. I look forward to Sunday!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-69150110226692455192012-05-12T07:59:48.008-07:002012-05-12T07:59:48.008-07:00Hi Rosemary, thanks for coming by!Hi Rosemary, thanks for coming by!Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-36073781063478970832012-05-11T18:27:22.438-07:002012-05-11T18:27:22.438-07:00oh so sadoh so sadSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-59633455943964161892012-05-11T15:35:53.697-07:002012-05-11T15:35:53.697-07:00beautiful beautiful beautiful.beautiful beautiful beautiful.tricia stirlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15462109680971905741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-62570676859887410842012-05-10T11:35:41.829-07:002012-05-10T11:35:41.829-07:00What a stirring and poignant poem!What a stirring and poignant poem!Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-47532334233537002022012-05-10T07:32:44.760-07:002012-05-10T07:32:44.760-07:00Words bring life..and hope..and that little girl h...Words bring life..and hope..and that little girl heard every word..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-1703587749233792362012-05-09T20:28:47.846-07:002012-05-09T20:28:47.846-07:00magnificent and melancholy, heartfelt and heartbre...magnificent and melancholy, heartfelt and heartbreaking, and I especially love the close.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-14437788729450140592012-05-09T20:18:13.112-07:002012-05-09T20:18:13.112-07:00Heartbreaking, but your words are beautiful.Heartbreaking, but your words are beautiful.Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-60916868419857474962012-05-09T19:55:58.392-07:002012-05-09T19:55:58.392-07:00The petals do dry and crack without kindness.. a f...The petals do dry and crack without kindness.. a few soft words can make them bloom again. Unfortunately it too rare a thing. Beautiful poemrallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-67523565315699980442012-05-09T19:43:01.443-07:002012-05-09T19:43:01.443-07:00This was beautiful and sad at the same time. So in...This was beautiful and sad at the same time. So intrinsic to the trials of womanhood. I've been nursing my operated on foot. But will be blogging once a week starting this Sunday.Debra Harris-Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08890783290789005185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-83392144093757941502012-05-09T19:37:36.671-07:002012-05-09T19:37:36.671-07:00I love these lines:
"its deciduous wings
fre...I love these lines:<br /><br />"its deciduous wings<br />freckled with snow"<br /><br />"her lips are smothered in glue"<br /><br />"I want to keep her voice<br />and speak to her of beautiful things"<br /><br />"The petals in my journal<br />begin to crack and dry"<br /><br />This is heartbreaking but so very good. Thank you for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com