tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post9023383819305802535..comments2023-05-18T06:59:59.945-07:00Comments on As if by magic: SweetmeatArchna Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03372418962433999972noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-32653527352235504312012-10-30T05:48:12.488-07:002012-10-30T05:48:12.488-07:00Hi Archna,
Yes, I can help you with posting your ...Hi Archna,<br /><br />Yes, I can help you with posting your share at D'verse.<br /><br />I suggest that you published the post and I will pick up the link for you. <br /><br />Grace Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-86649203605580348082012-10-26T01:59:43.101-07:002012-10-26T01:59:43.101-07:00aloha Archna - magic woven through a dream - encha...aloha Archna - magic woven through a dream - enchantment. i like the moment you have gone after - this waking only to slip back into sleep. the moment is rolled into the flutter and glitter of the word list and how you've used them - a light dusting that soaks through tasty morsels... you mix the ingredients and then bake it all into this story spilling out clear across the floor, until we pool back into our self. cool. and fun. aloha.Rick.Daddariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15663525408951676104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-36124649359413379422012-10-24T11:28:23.396-07:002012-10-24T11:28:23.396-07:00Magic sure abounds with a certain touch that was e...Magic sure abounds with a certain touch that was enjoyed very much.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-32478307075358654962012-10-24T11:19:29.087-07:002012-10-24T11:19:29.087-07:00Such a fantastical poem. I especially like the re...Such a fantastical poem. I especially like the reflection in sleep bringing rage and rumple. Very clever. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-8888502281564623542012-10-24T08:28:20.695-07:002012-10-24T08:28:20.695-07:00More than a touch of enchantment. It does read lik...More than a touch of enchantment. It does read like a fairy tale. Some of the imagery is fabulous. I also love all the 'S' words put together. <br />Beautiful.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-2811391305644137192012-10-24T07:17:47.417-07:002012-10-24T07:17:47.417-07:00shimmer and gold..what a dream..what a rich feast ...shimmer and gold..what a dream..what a rich feast of words..jaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-24545360576738457132012-10-24T06:56:45.758-07:002012-10-24T06:56:45.758-07:00this is nurturing and rich like a wonderful meal a...this is nurturing and rich like a wonderful meal and full of taste and scents and fairytale magic...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-60878166127309126692012-10-24T05:47:43.749-07:002012-10-24T05:47:43.749-07:00Thanks Oldegg. Yes, scorched would have painted th...Thanks Oldegg. Yes, scorched would have painted the layer a bit deeper, but scotched was on the list of words and I wanted to make it fit as possibly, scoring the skin. :) Thank you for always sending a supportive note my way. Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-80460150019117569482012-10-23T22:11:54.403-07:002012-10-23T22:11:54.403-07:00Once again you write words that in their use stare...Once again you write words that in their use stare us down in our bewilderment and then we nod our acceptance. Every poem of yours is an adventure; a test almost of our belief in the way the world can look if we have the imagination. (I would have preferred "Scorched" to "Scotched" though).Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-39275699438860083012012-10-23T21:08:00.292-07:002012-10-23T21:08:00.292-07:00"capturing winter glow in
her silver star emo..."capturing winter glow in<br />her silver star emollient"<br /><br />So many, many beautiful phrases and word choices...this poem just glitters of fairy-like magic!! Loved this! ♥Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-65471846816583186002012-10-23T19:25:48.072-07:002012-10-23T19:25:48.072-07:00I cannot write all of my fav lines. But this has ...I cannot write all of my fav lines. But this has a floe of geneous. It reads so beautifully out loud. I love the sounds, the S's expecially. I feel akin to this voice, I trust it to taske me where you want. Excellente!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-55117415495425698992012-10-23T15:32:50.505-07:002012-10-23T15:32:50.505-07:00wow...enchanting...like a fairy tale a bit...the a...wow...enchanting...like a fairy tale a bit...the alliteration throughout is spot on and really carries this well...there is an intersting magic to it...kinda like sleeping beauty...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-20571058012830718722012-10-23T15:20:47.892-07:002012-10-23T15:20:47.892-07:00This is lovely weaving of words ~ I specially lik...This is lovely weaving of words ~ I specially like strawberry leaves and butternut tree, and silver and sugar ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-64217497456065927502012-10-23T14:28:53.719-07:002012-10-23T14:28:53.719-07:00You've done a lot with the word list here, and...You've done a lot with the word list here, and also made a very vivid series of pictures tangling the human with the natural in a dreamstate from which one doesn't want to wake. I love 'rage and rumple' and 'silver star emollient' especially.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5351405002610941284.post-69564810334652161512012-10-23T14:17:14.744-07:002012-10-23T14:17:14.744-07:00Just gorgeous. I love these best:
"cluster ...Just gorgeous. I love these best: <br /><br />"cluster of swoon swept strawberry leaves"<br />"swallowing slices of buttermilk cream"<br />"smothering layers of clouds and steam"<br />"countless hours of bloodless sleep"<br />"only to fall back into her corpse" ... Wow. This is powerful and intense. Poor Countess.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com