I spent early evenings in the fields
with mothers, my own, and those
who were painted in frosted glass
Daughters, hunched between the rows
a litter of pauper sheep
worn, wooded toes
trailing tales of vine and grape
a hue of women, hollow eyes, baked and stained
his story told
Ninette was her own
she fed on his ruin:
'We march on Moscow', flurry firn, his error
'We send more', she flung handfuls of sweetened pebbles into the air
The taste in my mouth
thick and sour
Our brothers and fathers
yet to come home
And those who were buried, turned to fish under the snow
Our trust, he ate, and swallowed whole
His vindication:
The creeping plant in Burgundy, turning to black, peppered and old
Before him, there was a King who borrowed our souls
What was left, we sold to him, he used us to color the North in blood
A jingle still rings of children who are made of stone and snow
Hauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jen!
DeleteThe imagery is stunning. Powerful, and your writing is equally as wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteBeautiful imagery! War is so terrible, and you captured its essence with your words.
ReplyDeleteYes, war is nothing but terrible. Thanks Sherry!
Deletethe imagery describes the horror of war well
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheilagh!
DeleteThere is gravitas in this wonderful piece..like stone itself..women seem to be at the core..worn down..by a different kind of war perhaps..Jae
ReplyDeleteGravitas, as proprietors believe is war. I think that the ones left behind have as much solemn strength as those who leave. Unfortunately, their stories are rarely deemed.
DeleteI love the notion of borrowed souls. What a wonderful piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Danielle!
DeleteLike the Emergency Hospital workers in Afghanistan, your women know that there is no real honor or merit in war.
ReplyDeleteYes, and usually feed a lie of equality and prosperity as ambition. Sadly, hearts have been held out in hope.
DeleteThank you for visiting, Kim.
This is good!
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Thank you Gautami!
Deletewow, arcna, this is a chilling poem. i feel like this is
ReplyDeletean old folk tale steamed in truth told in bedrooms to
children at night.
This one is a tunnel through eastern Europe, but I'm sure that the same story, told in truth, would chill a child's bedroom in any corner of the planet.
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Paige.
a beautiful beauty told in cycles circling... war, what good is it....
ReplyDeleteMy thoughts: no good at all. :)
DeleteThank you for reading.